1. There are some places throughout my paper where I get wordy, or I just remain unclear. I'm going to find those (after reading my paper out loud, and looking through my peers' comments) and obliterate the confusion.
2.Throughout my paragraphs, I'm missing a couple things regarding my audience. Such as why they care, or how it applies to them specifically. I'm going to add those where ever I'm missing them.
3. I need some page numbers and my last name with it. Not so important, but it's the correct format, and it makes my paper more aesthetically pleasing.
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